There's not a whole lot to critique, this looks pretty nice. I'd just be sure not to forget the buckles on the straps over the chest and be sure her fringe is formed about right; the lowest folds could just use a bit more curve along the bottom, but that's it. I love the colors and the gleam of the leather of her suit, though. It looks marvelous. Also, her pose is really cool, too, and the biotic effect is great!